the section drawings (pullout of core, analysis of space and sections layers to form) look a little flat. perhaps laying a hidden line drawing over them so they pop, otherwise it appears as a grey mass of objects. also, the square frame of sections isn't very helpful. better, arrange them linearly and indicate where a group of important sections pertains to the massing or body positions.
don't forget the idea of orthographic projection you learned in first year. make those same relationships between plan, section, elevation, etc - but now with more complexity.
also, you will need a board that describes the process of casting as well. a negative version of your model, subtracted from a larger mass, which expressed the negative spaces to produce the model would show this - and then sections of that model to show the production of the solid.
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hi dustin,
the section drawings (pullout of core, analysis of space and sections layers to form) look a little flat. perhaps laying a hidden line drawing over them so they pop, otherwise it appears as a grey mass of objects. also, the square frame of sections isn't very helpful. better, arrange them linearly and indicate where a group of important sections pertains to the massing or body positions.
don't forget the idea of orthographic projection you learned in first year. make those same relationships between plan, section, elevation, etc - but now with more complexity.
also, you will need a board that describes the process of casting as well. a negative version of your model, subtracted from a larger mass, which expressed the negative spaces to produce the model would show this - and then sections of that model to show the production of the solid.
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